Since this is a perennial issue, I’m sharing this letter to parents about our student blogging launch in my AP Literature class. It’s important to realize that this approach is tailored to the age group of my 17-year-old seniors. They’ll be considered adults in a few short months, so I designed this parent approach with that fact foremost in mind. (This is not to say the letter wouldn’t work for earlier grades. I think it should be considered from maybe age 12 and up, since it discusses maturity and good judgment in managing your online identity, and that’s a discussion we all know has to happen as early as is reasonably possible.)
What I like about this approach is that parents can choose the level of privacy - name, image in photos and/or videos, comment moderation - for their “child” (we have to come up with a better word for the young adult offspring of parental units).
Another thing I like is that it doesn’t use the unfortunate term, “blogging.” It uses the label “connective reading and writing” instead. To me this is far from hair-splitting: it’s a way to separate my pedagogical purpose from the abomination of “blogs as on-line diaries” - god in heaven, the world can do without these - or, worse yet, “blogs as the new way to turn in homework” (god in heaven, students can do without these). To bang that drum again, blogging to answer teacher or textbook questions is not real writing, not authentic learning, and (usually) not relevant to students - but is a great way to make them hate blogging as yet another “schooly” imposition and drive them, as I wrote about so tirelessly several months ago in my “How Teachers Can Kill Student Blogging” series, back to their Facebooks and Myspaces for real writing.
By calling it “connective reading and writing” (and I tried to very briefly define and explain how revolutionary this is in the parent letter below), the emphasis is instead placed on self-directed reading and writing - and creating networks of interest with real-world writers by discussing their writing, linking to it, commenting on their blogs, and hoping to attract them to form a relationship by commenting back on the students’ blogs. This type of blogging is more properly considered “project-based learning,” the way I’m doing it this year, because I’m framing the 7-month blogging journey as a goal-oriented project: “I want to read real-world bloggers who write about x, write about my responses to what they write, and develop a network (or ‘community of interest,’ or whatever buzzword you like) with such people over the next 7 months.” That’s not just writing on a computer. That’s reading, writing, thinking, and connecting with a real-world purpose - beyond school. So that’s a project. They can learn so much more from others in the blogosphere than they can from us teachers about so many real things banished by the factory curriculum.
(But they still have to get it. And that’s a battle, since they’ve never had to get anything but how to study for the next test, or plan the prom, or be a cheerleader. Here, again, is the “envisioning your blog’s future results” activity on Google Docs as my best effort to help them “get it.”)
One last point before I paste the letter (and here’s its link on Google Docs, which you can freely use and adapt): anybody who’s following the idea so far might be wondering, “But how are you going to manage remembering the privacy levels chosen by the parents for each student? That seems like a nightmare.”
Here’s how: use Diigo. That’s what I’m going to do, anyway. Diigo now allows us to leave annotations (”stickynotes”) on web pages that are not attached to any highlighted texts, but just float on the page as a little yellow speech bubble. So I’m going to put a private, floating stickynote on each student blog’s homepage telling me the privacy levels chosen for him or her. It looks like this:
–hover over the speech bubble, and it shows you your annotation, eg.: “full name, pictures, videos okay, self-moderated comments,” or whatever.
So here’s the letter. If anybody wants to suggest changes, or collaborate on them, I’m all ears.
______________________
Student Name
Parent Consent for Student Weblogs
Dear Parent(s),
As part of the 21st Century Literacy initiative in the high school, your child is required to practice a new form of writing called connective reading and writing.
What is Connective Reading?
Connective reading involves finding writers on-line who specialize in a subject (or subjects) chosen by each student, and subscribing to those writers via RSS (Real Simple Syndication), and regularly reading those self-chosen writers’ new articles in the students’ RSS reader.1
What is Connective Writing?
Connective writing involves students writing, on their weblogs (”blogs”), about the writers and ideas ideas they read in their RSS readers. When writing about these writers’ articles, students will make hyperlinks (basic web links) to the articles they are writing about. And here’s where the power of 21st century writing comes in: the writers your child links to will quickly discover that they have been written about (through a site called Technorati), and in most cases, will visit your son’s or daughter’s weblog to read what they wrote. Why is this powerful? Because: if your child’s writing succeeds, the writers they’re writing about will comment on your child’s ideas and writings; and in the best cases, some of these real-world writers will take an interest in your child - after all, your child shares an interest with them - and will become mentors, guides, and supporters of your child’s learning through regular visits and “conversations” on your child’s weblog.
How Do Students Benefit by Connective Reading and Writing? Self-directed Learning, and Networking.
In short, it’s a way for your child to read more about subjects they have a genuine interest in; to learn more about that subject through reading about it; to write more - and better - in order to attract readers in the world who share their interest; and to develop a real-world network of adults with expertise in the subject your child wants to learn about.
Choose Your Child’s Level of Privacy
By school policy, your child will not be allowed to reveal personal information such as address, birthday, phone number, or email address. However, opinions differ about the use of a student’s full name, and about images of students in photos and videos - so we are offering you choice in these areas.
Please read the brief “for and against” summaries about names and images below, and check the option you prefer:
a. Name: If the student’s full name is used, his or her weblog will show up in Google and other search engines. Pro: For talented writers with maturity and good judgment, this can be a benefit, as a sort of “online portfolio” of the student’s work. Con: For students with less maturity, skill, and/or judgment, showing up on search engines may not be desirable. A “first name only” might be a better choice.
CHOOSE ONE OPTION ONLY:
___ MY CHILD MAY USE HIS/HER FULL NAME
___ MY CHILD MAY USE ONLY HIS/HER GIVEN NAME, NOT THE FAMILY NAME.
b. Image (photo or video): Pro: Like sharing your name, sharing photos and videos of yourself - an “author” photo, a “greeting to readers” video, for example - can be helpful in establishing connections with readers. We like being able to connect a face to a writer, to see and hear the writer on occasional video or audio clips. Con: Similar to use of full name, students with less maturity or poor judgment should perhaps not publish images or videos of themselves.
CHOOSE ONE OPTION ONLY:
___ MY CHILD MAY USE HIS/HER IMAGE AND VOICE IN PHOTOS AND VIDEOS
___ MY CHILD MAY NOT USE HIS/HER IMAGE IN PHOTOS AND VIDEOS, BUT MAY SHARE HIS/HER VOICE IN AUDIO CLIPS
___ MY CHILD MAY NOT USE HIS/HER IMAGE OR VOICE
c. Screening (”moderating”) reader comments: In connective writing, reader comments are the way learning networks are formed. While rude or inappropriate comments from the world are extremely rare, they are still possible. One option is for teachers to moderate (”screen”) all comments on a student’s weblog articles before he/she sees them. A second option is to allow students to moderate their own comments. A third option is to simply not moderate comments at all, and let them be published as soon as readers leave them.
Student Moderation: Pro: encourages responsibility, ownership, and maturity; Con: sensitive students might be unable to deal with inappropriate comments (remember, these are extremely rare).
No Moderation: Pro: Readers like to see their comments immediately after they submit them, which encourages more commenting; Con: rude or inappropriate comments (e.g., “spam” or uncivil remarks) might appear without the student’s immediate knowledge.
Teacher Moderation: Pro: shelters students from the possibility of a rude or inappropriate comment; Con: treats students like children instead of mature young adults.
CHOOSE ONE OPTION ONLY:
___ MY CHILD MAY MODERATE HIS/HER OWN COMMENTS
___ I WANT TEACHERS TO MODERATE MY CHILD’S COMMENTS FOR THEM
___ MODERATION OF COMMENTS IS NOT NECESSARY
If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me at [ EMAIL ADDRESS OR PHONE NUMBER HERE].
Please print your name, signature, and date in the spaces below. And thank you for your cooperation.
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1 Want to know more about RSS readers? Ask your child to show you his/her Bloglines account. You might decide it’s a powerful tool for staying abreast of the latest information about your own interests - many professionals around the world now use RSS readers in their daily professional life to remain competitive and up-to-date.
If you liked my post, feel free to subscribe to my rss feeds


















14 Comments
Hi, Clay!
I really like this concept: you’re not asking parents whether their child can blog but, rather, what some of the components of the blog will be. Give Parents and Students “voice” while preserving the integrity of the medium and the message.
Just curious…are the participants totally free to chose their area of interest. No worries about social or political correctness? (I know you would be open to most topics, but does your administration have any restrictions on student research?)
Keep those kids hopping!
diane
Diane, I’m as conservative as they come. I don’t let students write about anything against my own beliefs
Seriously, though: as things stand now, it’s an issue of addressing any posts of questionable judgment early - a “trust first, and coach when necessary” approach.
I’m curious to hear more of your thinking here. What scenarios do you have in mind?
Hi Clay, I think this is great and I love the idea about a project approach. That the connnected reading and writing has a goal in mind (At the moment my students blog reflectively). I think that the approach of being a guide or coach is better than proscribing topics that they may not write about or have topics that they “must” write about. Just some thoughts.
Hi Jo. I’m totally with you - and Diane, from what I’ve come to know about her through a few months of interaction now, is probably with you t00. I think Diane is thinking more widely about possible issues that responsible teachers using this approach should think about, and that’s why I really hope she replies soon. In fact, I’ll tweet her now (but I’ve shut down Twitter for the most part - too much distraction for my tastes).
This is a great post, particularly the parent letter. I’m not sure why millions of us haven’t thought of a great script like this and shared it - but I want to thank you for doing this, as it fits perfectly with some of the project-based work we are doing and planning to do more of in 2008. I’m not sure if we would do it exactly like this - but what you have done is highlight the key things to think about and to consider asking the parents. Super
Thanks Judy
Any links to your own ways of “doing it” differently? Add the ideas!
Judy, re: your question, “Why didn’t we do this earlier?” For me, the answer was the management problem: keeping up with different privacy profiles/permissions per student was too difficult.
That’s why I think the Diigo trick is essential. Without the stickynote, teachers are doomed to management issues.
Glad your site is back up!
Knowing my school population, I would anticipate some rather esoteric, if not questionable, choices for inquiry-based research! Our students are interested in the outdoors and, as they themselves put it “Redneck” activities (think rodeo, NASCAR, wrestling). Their vision is narrow and it’s sometimes difficult to suggest viable alternatives.
I let my 9 high school current events kids pick the issues they did a quick PowerPoint on - their choice of medium, not mine - and they did a fair job. Got a bit nervous when one boy started his presentation on underage drinking by stating that “We drink because we want to and you [adults] tell us not to”. He finished by mentioning the tragic accident that took the lives of two of our recent graduates last June. Three young adults died, and there were drugs & alcohol involved. So his work did reflect some thought and judgment.
I think that teachers would have to be very sensitive to community values and careful of allowing comments that were so authentic that they embarrassed or made targets of, the blogger, his classmates, his family, or the school. It’s a fine line we tread when it comes to balancing free expression and social sensitivity. Young adults sometimes lash out without thought for consequences. And those who are given freedom to post publicly need to consider the longevity of their remarks - into the college and career years and beyond!
Diane, thanks so much for pushing this conversation forward. It’s really one of the best comments I’ve had in a long time. Lots to respond to, so here goes:
You write:
“Knowing my school population, I would anticipate some rather esoteric, if not questionable, choices for inquiry-based research! Our students are interested in the outdoors and, as they themselves put it “Redneck” activities (think rodeo, NASCAR, wrestling). Their vision is narrow and it’s sometimes difficult to suggest viable alternatives.”
And my response makes even me uncomfortable, but it’s my current state of belief: if they want to write about NASCAR or hunting, let them. Look at the NYTimes. It has blogs for fashion, sports, business, and everything else you can imagine. And then think of the “Long Tail” phenomenon and niche markets: I have a student right now who has a passion for event planning, for example. We searched for bloggers in this niche, and found a couple hundred on Bloglines with that tag - but none of them were that good. So… can’t we see this as an opportunity for this student to compete with these other blogs to “corner the market” in event planning blogs? She can read the best of these other blogs, think of angles that none of them had hit - combining event planning with web 2.0, for example, or a million other creative possibilities - and seriously establish a presence among event planners by virtue of her “upping the game” and becoming a valuable resource, in the real world, for her ideas.
Homework assignments from all her other classes (and mine) will keep her curriculum-driven “research” agenda full enough. Here’s her chance for the education she wishes school would allow her, but doesn’t.
The same goes for students with a passion for gaming, coding, fashion, animals, and anything else - within reasonable (but liberal, if I have my way) limits.
The point is this, as I see it: they have to be able to read and write about something they love, in order to care at all - intrinsically - about what they’re reading and writing. Otherwise, it’s “schooliness” as usual.
Thoughts?
Your second point about the students who addressed their own drinking is fascinating. Granted, they don’t want to reveal their own crimes and misdemeanors in any imprudent way; but think of the heart of their topic: the sociology of adolescence. I want my students to explore their own psychology, their conditioning, their society’s values, the effects of our questionable educational system on their minds, habits, bodies, relationships, lives.
The trick is to guide and coach them into writing about it, again, prudently. I’m not accusing you of believing in what I’m about to say, but simply say what I’ve said so many times in these pages: “critical thinking about safe subjects is an oxymoron” - and it’s the norm in schools. That’s why students so often don’t value their classes: fearful teachers pose irrelevant issues to cover their backsides.
So again, though: this is a tough one. My goal is to authentically assess, through conversation (public in blog comments, private with Diigo stickynotes shared only to the group), students’ attempts to write well and insightfully about their chosen subjects.
As for your last point, you hit it on the head: the “fine line” of “balancing free expression and social sensitivity.” Me? I side with free expression, because progress has only ever come from those with the courage to think critically about social norms. From Socrates to Jesus to Martin Luther to MLK and Muhammed Ali, free thinking has never been popular when it differed from thoughtless social norms. But it’s usually been historically redeemed and cherished later.
Again, it’s all about guidance.
I think there’s more to add: student blogs aren’t widely read, posts can be deleted without anybody usually noticing or caring, and the WayBackMachine doesn’t cache everything. But I could be wrong. I hope more people chime in here.
Thanks again for the push, Diane. You’re the best.
Hi Clay,
You have managed to find the words and format in your letter to bridge the divide that exists between school, parent and pupil over new technology projects. It succinctly gives the specific information regarding the amount of privacy while explaining what this means in practice.
I gave out similar letters based on a specific new tech project ( Skyping outside school and class blogging ) last year, but I must admit I didn’t give the parents this level of information.
Thanks for sharing this with us all
Thanks Paul - feel free (and begged!) to leave a link to that Skype letter in a follow-up comment. It’s all about finding that already well-designed wheel, isn’t it?
Thanks for the kind words.
I like your twist on the name of the activity: connective reading and writing. Hmm, I teach Env Sci (for the first time at the high school level) and the end of the course is traditionally a research project. I’d been thinking more towards action/experimental research, but what if a blog was included which encouraged the students to seek out and connect with other researching env scientists as they design and carry out their own experiments…
Anne’s last blog post..The Representative Sample
I want to thank you for this Clay. I’m having discussions tomorrow with our School Admin people re the setup of a multi user blog. My Yr 7 students are pumped about the whole blogging thing and can’t wait to get started but were being held up by anxiety. Your letter will be an enormous help when I speak with them tomorrow. Thanks for sharing your work. BTW - great blog - I’ve just been switched onto it and have referred to you in a post I’ve written on my blog about ‘Did you ever wonder?’
http://jennylu.wordpress.com/2008/02/19/did-you-ever-wonder-did-you-know-with-an-environmental-edge/ . I’ve got you in my Google reader and will be reading with much interest.
Jenny Luca’s last blog post..Did you ever wonder? Did you know with an environmental edge.
thank u
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