Teaching Grammar on the Titanic: On Fear and Irrelevance in Education

“See, Hear, Speak No Evil” by AndyRamdin on Flickr

[Update: This post is extends a critique of my own teaching, and typical schooling in general, that I wrote last week in “I’m Nobody. Goodbye to All of That.” Makes sense to start there, if you haven’t read it already.]

I have a headache and a neck-and-shoulder ache, but we all know how thoughts wing away if we don’t snare them on take-off. This might be clumsy, but here goes.

I think I’m figuring out a way to make school more relevant - at least in my classroom. And how to liberate the young adults in my high school classroom from the diapers the classroom makes these infantilized physics-, calculus-, and Shakespeare-capable young adults wear and, worse yet, find natural, in the first place. I think I’m figuring out a way to give them the initiation into the world of adult citizenship, adult community, adult participation, adult empowerment, which they wish I’d invite them to enter.

You remember how angry you were, when you were in high school, to be treated like a kid by the adults, don’t you? How you knew you were capable of more than the adults allowed you to show? I think I’m figuring out how to stop being one of those adults myself, now. And how to stop being one of those teachers.

It occurs to me that this should be easy for a high school language arts teacher who has managed one Big Project - albeit it an ultimately trivial one - on web 2.0. I’ve already written about that, and have students in Seoul actually acting on it, with the year-long Global Cooling Project. That’s step one: re-design my fay little web 2.0 student showcase from the merry-go-round blue-print of last year - gee, kiddies, isn’t this fun? - to something modeled after the real-world campaigns in the adult world. Need examples? Check out the presidential campaigns in the US using YouTube, check out Live Earth’s website and its actions, praise goodness, beyond the “producing informational products” fetish of the current stage of our “school 2.0″ visionaries (that’s not aimed at you, Will). As if going from text only verbiage to multimedia verbiage is going to change anything.

Going back to Suzie Boss and the WorldChanging.com article, and back to the talismanic power the tagline of her forthcoming book holds on me now - “Real World Project-Based Learning in the Digital Age” - it’s clear that the notion of school should evaporate as much as possible when designing projects for my young adults. John Edwards, Barack Obama, Hillary, Giuliani, even Bush (if he ever learns to email and use “The Google”), Gore, Micheal Moore: all these adults use the media and the read-write web to “produce informational constructions of meaning” (as we so clumsily put it) for real world, relevant, important purposes. And here’s the rub: these world-changing adults are all still “learners” engaged in their own, adult, versions of “real world project-based learning.” It’s not like web 2.0 is old hat to them, either. You can bet your last dollar they’re learning up a storm on a minute-by-minute basis in all these campaigns.

Again, the difference: they’re applying that learning with a real-world purpose that can produce real-world change, for problems that matter. In school, our projects are usually lacking that vital element. Again, they’re just nice little diversions that for some tragically unfathomable reason we, as teachers, generally cannot think beyond. (Maybe it’s very fathomable, this shackling force. Maybe it’s simply fear of parents, administrators, community leaders, or the fear of being uncommon generally - though why trying to make engaged citizens out of young adults is a controversial issue among educators, of all people, is indeed tragic.)

So: the problem with me, as a teacher, is that I design units that don’t address anything important. I’ve been trained to think that my job is to stuff the headpieces of the next generation with such irrelevant things as the definition of litotes and onomatopoeia, to write cute little stories about nothing, to know Stratford-upon-Avon. To be able, paradoxically, to think critically about safe subjects. And above all, not to think about anything that might, god forbid, rankle the status quo. And let’s not even start to think about taking any sort of action.

Again, so: As soon as I stop thinking like a teacher, designing units derived from an institutional culture that defines me as a teacher, and subconsciously makes me far more traditional in my teaching than my progressively-posing ego likes to acknowledge….as soon as I re-define myself as a community leader - as that once-upon-a-time American thing called a citizen - instead, maybe the young adults of my community might have an opportunity to learn how to function in the world they’ll inherit from and manage for us all-too-soon.

I know. Wordy. I have a headache. I’ll move on.

The task of last year’s 1001 Flat World Tales “project”? (For those of you who don’t know it, it actually managed to get over a dozen schools from four or five continents writing together on a wiki in self-contained k-12 collaborative workshops, though some of those workshops crashed and burned. The one my students participated in with Arapahoe ((Denver)) and Honolulu made it to the end of the two-month unit.) That task was something like, “Write a story that reveals your local culture for readers from other cultures.”

Cindy Barnsley, who worked on the project in Australia (with Shanghai and Serbia - it crashed, but not without lessons learned, so it wasn’t a failure), has taken me to task for damning my own baby, and she’s partly justified. The conceptual objective of the project was a more conscious, more critical, understanding of the students’ own, and their global peers’ “Other,” cultures. The skills? To use process writing coupled with the 6 Traits of Effective Writing to refine those writing skills, giving and receiving peer feedback from across the globe.

I’m not saying it’s garbage, Cindy. I’m saying that, when all is said and done, and all that energy in bringing together, in my workshop alone, 130 students from the Korean peninsula, the mid-Pacific Ocean, and the Rocky Mountains - when all that energy has been expended, what’s the result? Students have written a story for their English class. And it’s been published in a little e-Book (sorry, but I still think it’s true in the grand scheme of things, though I loved some of the writing that happened there).

Couldn’t that immense amount of energy have been expended on something more consequential?

Yes. And how it could, by the way, is the idea that spurred me to sit down and write this post now. Here’s how:

Real-world literature - the great works we tame in our classrooms - invariably consists of precisely the critical thinking and literacy skills we aimed to develop in the 1001 Tales. But that project was fatally flawed by it’s lack of real-world literature’s concomitant element: a social problem worth criticizing.

“Reveal your culture” is so pathetically fay and schooly by that standard.

These young adults are screaming their critical attitude toward the roles we’ve limited them to in our culture in everything they do, from their attitudes to their music, fashions, and past-times. They live in passive revolt against what schools, parents, communities at large are doing to them. And having no constructive outlet, they either self-destruct or seek solace in the trivial.

So why not let them write about that?

A bit more: They’re also woefully oblivious to the burning issues of their futures (and that pun, though pregnant, was not intended). Doug has commented about the fear in (American) schools of teaching anything controversial, god help us (and this does not mean Doug’s complicit in that). That’s a screaming admission that schools fear relevance.

The logical corollary? Fear makes schools irrelevant.

Etymology time: “Educate” - “to lead out.” If we’re afraid, as educators, to lead our students “out” to anything important in the real world, what exactly are we doing? I mean, besides paying the bills and perpetuating worldly ignorance?

So back to those “burning issues”: Diane got me thinking about the need for educators to serve as “futurist guides” to remedy the “soft news diet” of mainstream media and community ignorance of what scientists of all stripes, social as well as natural, are unable to get us to notice. (Another etymology check: “science” - “knowledge”; one hopes schools would defend science, especially in the anti-scientific US, against its detractors, but I’m not seeing it. I’m seeing more cowed, fearful, silent educators.)

Again: “Our past is not their future.” If the international community of scientists is dismissed as crank Cassandras by the Bush administration, by fundamentalist churches, and by all the followers in our communities of the information campaigns so powerfully managed by both of those camps, how do our children stand a chance of meeting future challenges if we’re afraid to talk about them? We’re like the current Democratic congress: we have the power, but we fail our constituents by fearing to wield it for the best interests, scientifically-grounded, of that community and of the globe.


So instead of a writing project that limits students to expressing what they already know too well - that they’re subtly ticked off and passively rebellious over their infantilization and the irrelevance of schools - why can’t we, as “futurist guides,” “lead them out” to questions posed by science about their futures?

That’s another “problem worth criticizing via literature.” Students around the globe comparing artfully-crafted, critically-observed notes in story form of the “consensus trance” of their local community as it trashes their futures with nary a thought. Students being encouraged to authentically express whatever satirical, lyrical, tragic, comic, or utopian variation on this theme suits them. Or to challenge the premise. This is not indoctrination, but “teaching the controversy,” as Doug so sharply frames it.

Or are we so afraid to educate (instead of merely teach) that we can’t even ask open questions like: “Is global warming a problem?”

If so, isn’t school kind of like studying for the SAT on the deck of the Titanic - post-iceburg?

Parting shot. On July 9, I mentioned in my little “personal commencement” post, which announced my graduation from the web 2.0 church and conversion to the church of relevance, that one of my new goals is to become “less of a teacher and more of a community leader, and to expand my relationship with the young adults in my community beyond the 9-month term.” Something like that, anyway.

One of the things that has disturbed me in that respect is this: I’ve had expressions of interest from surely more than 30 adults about the “Year of Global Cooling” and “Concerts for Global Chilling” project targeted to culminate, “flat world community service” style, on Earth Day of next year. I’m literate enough in the science to think it’s worth continuing to “flog” this idea on this blog, as Jeff Wasserman so pricelessly (and accurately) put it. I’m trying to be the change I want to see, and I insist that the time to get young adults involved in starting the “real-world project-based learning” so historically relevant to their futures is now, in the summer - before school swallows them back into homework and SAT-world for nine fallow months beginning soon. These young adults are free right now to be relevant. And if I’m right, some of them would like the opportunity to be invited into that relevance and treated like they could have some fun doing something good.

So here’s what’s bothering me: If 30 educators have expressed interest and even joined the project Ning, but only one has managed to produce a single young adult - while over 20 students here in Seoul are working on it, during summer, with no grades involved - does that indicate something troublesome about our relationships, as youth leaders (we are youth leaders, like it or not), with our youth? And is that troubling thing possibly rooted in some strange perversion of adult-youth community relations caused by the fact that schools make teachers “want vacations from the kids” because . . . beyond assigning them work, disciplining them, and branding them with grades, we don’t have human relationships to them?

I fear the answer is too often yes. If not, why are no world youths being told about this by their educators during the summer? Is it that hard to pass an email invitation to a few young adults in our communities, when we spend nine months a year with them? What’s going on there?

Finally: Cindy Barnsley’s blog has a great conversation going right now about “dissenting voices” and the need for them. (See cocomments in the sidebar too.) I hope it goes without saying that I shouldn’t have to apologize for any statements critical of the status quo. I’m here to field comments and learn from those that teach me. (And Dana, did this help you understand what I’m getting at?)



Photo 2: “The Ghosts of No Evil” by lindes on Flickr.
Photo 3: “See No Evil, Hear No Evil, Speak No Evil” by Auntie P on Flickr.
Photo 4: “Fear Squared” by seetwist on Flickr.
Photo 5: “Fear Limited Edition Tee” by spcoon on Flickr.

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13 Comments

  1. Carolyn Foote
    Posted July 13, 2007 at 8:59 am | Permalink

    Wow.

    Your questions about our relationships with our students are powerful ones.

    Are we, in a 24/7 learning world, as teachers or teaching librarians (or college professors) simply doing our own course or content, and then moving on?

    I wrote about this on my own blog, but your questions in a previous post caused me to wonder why our district disables student email during the summer, and encourages me to point out reasons why we shouldn’t.

    If a school is a community, what are things we can all do to make it more so, to make it a community that exists all year long?

    Lots to think about here. Thanks for sharing your inner dialogue about transforming your own teaching. We all learn from it.

  2. Clay Burell
    Posted July 13, 2007 at 9:12 am | Permalink

    Thanks for your comment, C, and I encourage you to link to any relevant writing you’ve done yourself in your comments so we can read you too. I wonder if we shouldn’t just form authentic community networks with our students - strike that - our young community members by simply exchanging permanent email addresses to circumvent schooly control over our community relations altogether?

  3. Clix
    Posted July 13, 2007 at 9:48 am | Permalink

    Hm. I admire your passion, but I disagree with you on a couple of points - namely, that global warming is The Big Problem facing us today, and second, that it is a problem students should simply be encouraged to tackle.

    I feel a post bubbling up here.

  4. Clay Burell
    Posted July 13, 2007 at 9:54 am | Permalink

    I look forward to the substance behind the disagreement. Let us know if/when that post bubbles up. Could turn into a good exchange.

    I’d love to hear your reasons for a) dismissing the magnitude of climate change, and b) discouraging young people from thinking about unsustainable lifestyle changes.

    And mind you, I’m not saying schools shouldn’t be teaching the basic skills. Just that maybe there are more relevant ways to do that than with inauthentic “Dick and Jane” exercises.

    Look forward to hearing from you.

  5. diane
    Posted July 13, 2007 at 9:39 pm | Permalink

    Carolyn and Clay, Maybe we’re going about this backwards. The young adults I encounter who are activists have already chosen their causes - Eagle Scouts, Reality Check members, etc. Perhaps we should see what they’re already doing and build on it, explore its larger ramifications with them and others, and make connections from the bottom (students) up, rather than from the top (teachers, administators) down.

  6. Clix
    Posted July 13, 2007 at 9:52 pm | Permalink

    a) Well, there’s absolute magnitude, which I don’t dispute (I do think that climate change is an important issue) and then there’s relative magnitude. Personally, I think that starvation/malnutrition, disease control, slavery and other human rights issues are more important.

    b) Rephrase in smaller words, please? What “unsustainable lifestyle changes” do you mean? I would’ve thought the typical American lifestyle IS unsustainable, and we want to ENCOURAGE change. I’m not sure I’m clear on what you’re trying to say.

    I did post more thoroughly on my blog.

  7. Clay Burell
    Posted July 14, 2007 at 4:14 am | Permalink

    Diane - Good point, and thanks for identifying the teacher-centric element in my thinking. Earlier, I’d asked for comments pointing me to similar initiatives already underway to join, rather than creating a new one, and your comment helps that way. Something to keep on the mental table as this all unfolds.

    Clix, thanks for more. As for the abundance of “causes,” and their “relative magnitudes” point, I’ve thought about that, and here’s the summary so far:

    First, for most developed nations and schools in them, local action for local change - and the learning of local citizenship that would breed in students - doesn’t seem to have an outlet for most of the causes you mention, unless there are local instances of starvation, epidemic, and slavery in your neck of the woods. So I would argue that while acting on these things is laudable, it’s also abstract. I’m not, mind you, saying one cause should be dropped by another (false either/or). I’m just saying that if students work locally to reduce the school’s and community’s carbon footprint, the sense of empowerment to make change would be stronger for them, and encourage direct citizenship more.

    Second, since industrialized countries are the biggest polluters (and America the biggest of all, so much because of unnecessary waste), their local habits are causes of climate change elsewhere. And climate change is causing droughts and floods that result in the food shortages and starvation you speak of. So local action to reduce waste and change wasteful habits have an effect on the issue you mention anyway. (In this respect, the fact that modern agriculture depends on oil-based fertilizers, for which there is now no alternative, spells starvation of a much larger magnitude as our oil reserves continue to deplete so unnecessarily rapidly. Google “Peak oil fertilizer” and you should get some eye-opening results.)

    Smaller words: my students are not starving, they’re not slaves, and there are no epidemics facing them. So these problems don’t immediately affect them. Thus they’re less invested in caring about them. Global warming does affect their futures - they know this - so it offers an “enlightened self-interest” stake to them. And again, at the same time, it affects food shortages worldwide, so it has its consequences there too.

    As for your second question, I read your first comment’s “I disagree that . . . [global warming] is a problem students should simply be encouraged to tackle” as an opinion that we shouldn’t encourage students to change their “unsustainable lifestyle” habits. Your latest comment clarifies that for me - you don’t mean to say that.

    Will Richardson writes a post of simple lifestyle changes that we could guide our students to consider as a good starting point. I just see web 2.0 student networking to a) organize local music festivals to elevate the issue, and b) use web 2.0 to create digital content for this “lifelong project” a la LiveEarth as a way to show that it’s possible to “have fun doing good” (concert), and that web 2.0 in schools can be more relevant than homework assignments that when finished, are finished. That’s the “real world project-based learning” angle I keep harping on. Our real-world projects rarely end when we get a grade. Relevance doesn’t need grades as a motivator.

  8. Clay Burell
    Posted July 14, 2007 at 4:15 am | Permalink

    Oh, and Clix, why don’t you link to that post you say you wrote?

  9. Cindy Barnsley
    Posted July 14, 2007 at 8:29 am | Permalink

    HI Clay,
    I’ve been thinking about your post for a while. I have also been thinking about the difference between cognitive (schooly) learning (e.g. teaching grammar, vocab, literary terms) and experiential learning (e.g the global cooling project). The dearth of learning by doing in school is frustrating because we know there is more to learning than the abstracted, stimulus-response type activities that predominate. You touch on something important when you write that students need to be “invested” in their own learning. Learning by experience is characterised by personal involvement with and confrontation of practical, social, personal or research problems. The question is how do we make this happen within the confines of what we are mandated to teach? Maybe the “teaching the controversy” is one possibility. I also struggle with my deep-seated belief (being a writer maybe I need to have this) that writing is, in itself, a worthwhile, valuable activity that has concrete, real-world application. That was my point about the 1001 Tales project. Helping students find their “voice”, providing them with the means for self-expression and to understand and articulate complex thinking will help them to be active citizens who can participate and effect social change. I agree with you that the “Reveal your culture…” frame of 1001 Tales was probably too “schooly”, safe and simplistic. Whereas, the “big” problems we face as humans such as global warming, genocide, war and poverty are much more complex and challenging. I think deep thinking, understanding and communication (written, oral or multimedia) are the natural partners of action. I thought of Foucault in The Masked Philosopher, when I was writing this and his comment sums of the type of analysis I’m thinking of: “I can’t help but dream about a kind of criticism that would not try to judge, but bring an oeuvre, a book, a sentence, an idea to life; it would light fires, watch the grass grow, listen to the wind, and catch the sea-foam in the breeze and scatter it. It would multiply, not judgments, but signs of existence; it would summon them, drag them from their sleep. Perhaps it would invent them sometimes - all the better. All the better.”
    I’m going to ponder this a bit more…

  10. Clix
    Posted July 14, 2007 at 8:41 am | Permalink

    Oops! I thought I had, but it seems that it links to my main page. The direct URL is http://uncomfortableadventures.blogspot.com/2007/07/relevance-consequence-and-adolescents.html

    In starting with something local, you’re right, it probably wouldn’t be one of the Big Issues, as there’s no “immediate affect” for them (I mention the importance of clear success in the post). However, a process as entrenched as global warming is not going to be immediately affected by what they do, either.

    It’s easy to feel overwhelmed by large-scale systemic problems. I think that students who have experienced success tackling something else will be better equipped for the challenges involved in working toward a goal that’s larger than they are.

    The fact that I think other issues are more important than global warming isn’t really the issue I want to raise - just happens to be a point of personal disagreement. I think students who’re just getting started as problem-solvers need to see a clear connection between what they do and the solution to the problem.

  11. Clay Burell
    Posted July 16, 2007 at 1:39 pm | Permalink

    Cindy, this is over-due. Sorry. I’m so in agreement with you on the value of writing, and don’t mean at all to imply it should be minimized in any way.

    Maybe we disagree on whether writing alone qualifies as engagement. So many of our writers both wrote and took action - Orwell in Spain, Gandhi everywhere come to mind, who else? To couple active involvement to what one writes about would, I would think, fuel further writing?

    But to be really clear, here: that duty of ours to help our charges find their voices about things worth writing about - again, I’m in total agreement with you.

    I’m watching videos made by Mabry Middle School (in US, that’s age 11-14, I think) students that are incredibly engaged and consequential, as well as well-written. See them here, at about the midway point.

    Thanks as usual. Your writing, by the way, changes me. So maybe you’re on to something.

  12. Cindy Barnsley
    Posted July 17, 2007 at 4:04 am | Permalink

    Hi,
    I was thinking about whether writing is enough in itself (”whether writing alone promotes engagement”)- but maybe this is wrong question. Often writing is “good” because it connects with others. On that basis it is both a precursor to, and partner of, action. The problem with “schooly” writing is that it is so disconnected and decontextualised that it becomes meaningless - it has no apparent relevance to students’ lives.
    Effective writing (including media) - genuinely persuasive communication - creates engagement with others, as you mentioned with Mabry’s Chocolate Wars video. It can help you understand a problem and want to find/be part of a solution. So while the writer themselves may act (Orwell) the writer’s words can prompt thousands, if not millions, of others to act (Smith, Marx). On this note, check out this article in The Guardian, by Terry Eagleton, who writes that “For almost the first time in two centuries, there is no eminent British poet, playwright or novelist prepared to question the foundations of the western way of life.” It has been this critical creativity (not the sole reserve of writers I know) that has, as you write, brought “new ideas from the periphery to the mainstream”.
    It is this creativity that great “teachers/leaders” help you to find.
    Thanks.
    C.

  13. Clay Burell
    Posted July 17, 2007 at 4:21 am | Permalink

    Cindy, You’re right: “Effective writing (including media) - genuinely persuasive communication - creates engagement with others, as you mentioned with Mabry’s Chocolate Wars video. It can help you understand a problem and want to find/be part of a solution. So while the writer themselves may act (Orwell) the writer’s words can prompt thousands, if not millions, of others to act (Smith, Marx).”

    I strongly agree with what you’re saying. It also makes me see the need to clarify that an emphasis on “action” needn’t be on the vast Romantic scale, but rather on the individual and personal - shopping choices are a good example.

    If the Mabry students, who really did dissuade me from supporting Snickers and Mars, are still buying their Snickers after making their film - are not changing their own actions, while urging others to do so - I still find that problematic. A side issue, I guess.

    Thanks for the Eagleton article. Will read. His Theory intro was a mainstay in college.

    And for the record, I was quoting Christopher Sessums in that “periphery ideas” line.

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