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On Old and New Forms of Writing

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Bud Hunt at Bud the Teacher recently posted a link to the text version of the now-viral “The Machine is Us/ing Us” video and suggests classroom (and teacher) reflection on the differences between the pure-text medium and the web 2.0 version.

I’ve had the same idea for a while–ever since presenting Karl Fisch’s “Did You Know?” video to my school admin in early January. I kept pausing Karl’s video to invite the administrators to reflect on how much more effective the video was as a communication medium over the traditional way–printing out Karl’s text and handing copies to everyone to read and discuss.

My superintendent–a wonderful literacy enthusiast–chimed in with some great comments. She noted the critical thinking involved in Karl’s isolation of only the most powerful information for inclusion in the video, and articulated how much skill it takes to separate the wheat from the chaff in this way. “That’s critical thinking,” she said.

She also noted the power of the timing of Karl’s text, and how radical this ability to control the readers’/audience’s pace of reading was–thanks to web2.0. It was a great thing, having these conversations about web2.0 as new literacies, and not as technology.

Yes, we all know that, but ritual repetition creates new realities. So it bears repeating.

SO…Bud posted the link to the text for “The Machine is Us/ing Us.” I’m just going to copy and paste it below, followed by the video itself–so now the “lesson” is all in one place. (And Karl, I can’t find an embeddable version of “Did You Know?”, nor a text version, to add to this exercise. Can you help out by showing me where they might be? It’s so worth doing!)

Here’s the text (with some formatting glitches I tried but failed to fix, sorry):

Web 2.0 … The Machine is Us/ing Us

Text is linear

Text is unlinear

Text is said to be unlinear

Text is often said to be unlinear

Text is unlinear when written on paper

Digital text is different.

Digital text is more flexible.

Digital text is moveable.

Digital text is above all…hyper.

Digital hypertext is above all…

hypertext is above all…

hypertext can link

hypertext can link

here

here

or here…

virtually anywhere

anywhere virtually

anywhere virtual

The WayBack Machine

http://yahoo.com

Take Me Back

Oct 17, 1996

Yahoo

View Source

Most early websites were written in HTML

HTML was designed to define the structure of a web document.

is a structural element referring to “paragraph”

  • is also a structural element referring to “List Item”

    As HTML expanded, more elements were added.

    Including stylistic elements like (sic) for bold and for italics

    Suck elements defined how content would be formatted.

    In other words, form and content became inseparable in HTML

    Digital Text can do better.

    Form and content can be separated.

    http://www.cnn.com

    RSS XML

    View Source

    XML was designed to do just that.

    CNN.com

    < title > does not define the form. It defines the content.

    http://www.cnn.com/?eref=rss_topstories

    same with

    CNN.com

    and

    and virtually all other elements in this document.

    They describe the content, not the form.

    So the data can be exported,

    free of formatting constraints.

    Latest News

    Anthro Blogs (124)

    Savage Minds

    8apps: Social Networking for Productive People

    WORLD CHANGING ANOTHER WORLD IS HERE

    Antrho Journals (124)

    University of California Press

    Journals Digital Publishing

    Current Anthropology

    AESonline.org

    Google

    With form separated from content, users did not need to know complicated code to upload content to the web,

    I’m Feeling Lucky

    Create Blog

    Name Your Blog

    Beyond Etext

    http://beyondetext.blogspot.com

    Choose a template

    Your blog has been created!

    Monday, January 29, 2007

    Hello World!

    POSTED BY PROFESSOR WESCH AT 8:14 PM 0 COMMENTS

    There’s a blog born every half second

    and it’s not just text…Search

    YouTube

    Broadcast Yourself

    This is a video response to The Beauty of Being Human

    flickr

    Ahoy mwesch!

    Upload Photos

    Anthropology club

    Created by you.

    KSU Anthropology club

    Club Photos

    Google

    XML facilitates automated data exchange

    two sites can “mash” data together

    flickr maps

    I’m Feeling Lucky

    Limelight

    Fluffy and white

    Brushy Creek

    Tokyo Delve’s Sushi B..

    Who will organize all of this data?

    TAG

    del.icio.us

    digital ethnography hypermedia anthropology

    save

    Who will organize all of this data?

    We will.

    You will.

    Google

    XML + U & Me create a database-backed web

    a database-backed web is different

    the web is different

    the web

    we are the web

    I’m Feeling Lucky

    WIRED

    We Are the Web

    When we post and then tag pictures teaching the Machine to give names, we are teaching the Machine.

    Each time we forge a link, we teach it an idea.

    Think of the 100 billion times per day humans click on a Web page teaching the Machine

    the Machine

    Diigo

    Highlight

    Highlight and Sticky note

    Mwesch’s private note

    the machine is us

    Digital text is no longer just linking information…

    Hypertext is no longer just linking information…

    The Web is no longer just linking information…

    The Web is linking people…

    Web 2.0 is linking people…

    …people sharing, tracing, and collaborating…

    Wikipedia

    Web 2.0

    edit this page

    We’ll need to rethink a few things…

    We’ll need to rethink copyright

    We’ll need to rethink authorship

    We’ll need to rethink identity

    We’ll need to rethink ethics

    We’ll need to rethink aesthetics

    We’ll need to rethink rhetorics

    We’ll need to rethink governance

    We’ll need to rethink privacy

    We’ll need to rethink commerce

    We’ll need to rethink love

    We’ll need to rethink family

    We’ll need to rethink ourselves.

    by

    Michael Wesch

    Assistant Professor of Cultural Anthropology

    Kansas State University

    Digital ethnography

    @ Kansas State University

    music by DEUS “There’s Nothing impossible”

    This work is licensed under the Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 2.5



  • Now here’s the video:

    (By the way, I posted it on my class blog–not as an “assignment,” just sharing–and here are two unsolicited, and pregnant, student comments from ninth graders:

    2 Comments

    1. wow, this is a cool video
      it really does show that text on screen can do so much more than lead on paper.

      — February 4, 2007

    2. awesome!
      it clearly shows that networking is far more efficient then writing!
      The these stuff confuses me
      hope i can learn them and be an expert in computer networking

      — February 4, 2007


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    1. Sure. There are about 4 or 5 incarnations on YouTube, try using this one to embed. I’ll email you the text of Did You Know - I’ll get it online tomorrow.

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      Karl Fisch

      19 Feb 07 at 11:36 am

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